Ey old music'c coming back with a vengeance! :D Glad I inspired this remake.
It's definitely all the more atmospheric now, though the melody's an interesting one, it's atmospheric but also sometimes a little... dissonant? With layers and tonalities that clash a bit, or don't seem to lead anywhere? I like the percussion, and the sound's rich and vibrant, with the calmer parts in particular you can really hear the sound of nature; understand the title too... with the overall composition... maybe it could sound a bit more congruent?
Keep it up though! Big improvements on production quality overall since the last one, and it's a rich mix, a lot going on... just maybe a little too much sometimes IMO.
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