Props to your teacher on really crafting some masterful music here! Such a sad story... I don't follow all the way, but at the end, I guess they're reunited in death? For a while I thought the black bird was the darkness within himself; that he'd somehow caused the death of the other one... when at the start I thought he was really doing something good. Helping out. Giving some food. The tree... not good at all? Poisonous fruit? I feel like I'm losing a vital part of the narrative, but overall so well crafted. You bring forth the emotion for real.
-cd-