lol, double twist. I thought these Just a Mask cartoons had reached a conclusion already! Nice work though.
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lol, double twist. I thought these Just a Mask cartoons had reached a conclusion already! Nice work though.
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Yeah a bit late, but saw a new trailer and thought I'd do a quick take on it.
Ffor once I wish the file would've actually taken a bit longer to load! That introductory message was intense. The movie itself, well it was pure genius, for a moment I was thinking it'd be as random as it seemed to be but... the pun was introduced right from the start! Should've caught on earlier. Great work.
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Glad you enjoyed it! Hope you saw the alternative original ending coz for a day or two it was gonna just be that exactly, just a completely random vid; but it was terrible so I went back to the drawing board.
lol, a post-apocalyptic jellyfish future? Interesting.,
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YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.
and thank you
That 'play' button on the title screen seems so incredibly small compared to all surrounding buttons! As for the animation though, I remember the bar scene from last year, but man I had no idea it'd been a year since then already... time flies! The mood's brighter in this one, the shooting scene was slick, the voicing good... not much happens overall though. They walk down the street (in this scene I was expecting some music though - or background noise - had to turn up the volume to see if I was missing something those first few seconds), shoot some stuff (lmao Darnell... wonder if Nene will make an appearance in the final part?) and plan to leave. It's not short, or boring but still somehow eventless in terms of plot progression. Looking forward to next year; Happy Pico Day!
Oh dammit, I always mean to make the play button the biggest button... or at least of equal size. At least I no longer use a youtube button :p
I was really considering whether to upload this scene, 'cause like you said, nothing happens plot-wise really. The third scene is kinda like that too but serves as comic relief for all the serious stuff that's brought up through the film, and then the 4th and final scene is the big one where everything happens.
And yeah, I remember you saying you were looking forward to seeing the full thing this Pico Day, but that didn't happen :p I do have the first 3 scenes done, with a bunch of changes and improvements done to the first scene as well. I also have a few seconds done of the 4th scene, but it's like 8 minutes long so it still got a bit of work to do. Next Pico Day maybe ;3
About background music in the beginning, I was going to try to find some, or at least some city ambiance, but then I decided "Eh, the next part is mostly music so why bother" plus the Pico Day deadline was coming up fast so I didn't have time to find some good music to use.
And I hadn't really thought about a Nene cameo. While animating the part with Darnell shooting himself I thought "People are going to find this racist... huh ya know, it would make more sense to Have Nene killing herself since she's Asian... wait that's probably more racist" In the end I didnt' care 'cause I already had a bunch of it animated. I do have an idea for where she can appear now though ;3
Thanks for the review and Happy Pico Day!
Haha, I really wasn't expecting that ending! Awesome job at making the foes seem as sinister as possible, the eyes shifting shape and color, the magical swirls and subtle sounds and then... I thought he was a bit more attached to that sceptre! :O Or whatever it's called. Felt like you were getting back on track with this after the last surprisingly short animation, but alas it is the grand finale! The end! Within an unforseable future! It's sad news but best of luck out there in the real world; hope to see more projects of yours when time allows it.
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Thanks Cd, always loved your constructive criticism, even when I didn't do my best. I hope one day, hopefully some time soon, I'll be getting more feedback from you once again. You're a great piece to the community of NG :)
Woo, that was... incredibly cute and surprisingly creepy... but still way more cute than creepy. Soft music, cheerful voice acting and a simple plot somewhat intensified by arrays of spiderlegs and what I first assumed to be a group of monsters staring out from behind that helping sister. It's a subtly surprising short!
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Yeah i wish i could do more for the spider bodies with which the sisters posess (If you know the Dark Souls story) and give them more screen time but i just didn't have any ideas for them. If this short does well i will try making something for them next time. Thank you for your comment. ^^
Bamboo Shoots!
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