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During that initial sequence I thought you were pointing out that the Apple was an Apple, lmao, took all the way till Pear before I realized it was the character name. There's a real overload of character names in this, and scenarios for battle, but none of them really play out. I think it could do well as both series or game, it's got fruity heroes and sinister villains, and light (she stands out a bit - the only one not related to food - makes me wonder if there are other similar entities that aren't necessarily edible items). It's a creative collection of character design, not too dramatic but still pretty exiting. Good music, smooth animation, overall it's a good pilot, but if there was a consistent plot mixed in it'd be way better! This kinda jumps from one scene or fight to the next, but as it isn't an actual episode that's totally understandable. Hope there'll be something made out of this!

-cd-

Hypergon702 responds:

Thanks for the critique, I really appreciate it. Yeah, it isn't meant to be a pilot, it's more of a proof of concept. I decided to overload it with characters as I believed they were the main selling point of this idea. I have developed a cohesive plot already, but I figured keeping it a mystery would make the concept more intriguing. Next time, I'll definitely consider showing more depth to the story. And yes, there are other entities that are not edible, some that are very pivotal to the story.

lmao, well at least these episodes never grow old! The part with the grandpas must've been a favorite. Though kinda weird in a way how the main tooth's either surrounded by two grandma's and two grandpa's, never one of each, though they look like a couple... or like twins. Anyway, script was great. Not as fast-paced as last time, but just faultless, completely creative and comedic all the way. Nice work!

-cd-

MACception responds:

Thanks man :) Always good to see your reviews! The fast paced episodes are usually an exception. They tend to be slower :P

Haha, I'm thinking this would've been a perfect submission for one of those so-called Flash Floods. ;) Entertsining; informative both, and a new incredibly detailed location to look at too. Nice work!

-cd-

RadioTubeClock responds:

Lol that's true. Thanks for the review!

Another awesome episode! Nwar and Blanche seem like the optimal duo, was thinking that she wouldn't be more than s die-character after she was randomly thrown out because she was smoking hot... cigarettes, so, the end was a nice surprise! As always great narrative, and a pretty clever plot too. Keep it going!

-cd-

danmarkowitz responds:

Thanks again! There's probably going to be a bonus mini episode on YouTube next week, and then the next full episode in a few weeks!

The best part of this is the voice acting, and the script, it's such a powerful narrative that it wouldn't matter if there was no animation at all - but the animation's good. It enforces the atmosphere even further. And woah, there's a game trailer waiting after the pilot ends! :O Nice... whatever this turns into I'm looking forward to it! Hope you assemble a creative crew that pulls through and makes this happen!

-cd-

Alucard responds:

8 years into the future and here we are doing content together bro!!

lmao, what an ending! This seems way too pro111! to be a spam series. ;) Really though, the animation's great, slick and fluent, with some entertaining speech, good music and plenty of carness. Couldn't ask for more, keep it going!

-cd-

juanford66 responds:

ill try make moar episodies i promise, if i can.

I think this pilot might mark the start of an awesome series! Though, attempting to think up future potential plots, it seems like with the vast icy widths of this glacial landscape there'd be little to focus on other than fish, penguins (well maybe a few other animals), and fire and ice... all elements of which this episode contains. I wonder who gave him that pckage of fish sticks though? Might be something to build upon there! :) If you can think up more, I'd be happy to see more. Keep it going!

-cd-

ItsChickenPIES responds:

Thank you for your kind words, your points are definitely valid and I will try to make a storyline that is both interesting and entertaining, as you said being arctic based means there is limits to what can and can't be there. I have ideas for the series and I hope people like what I come up with.
Thanks for the feedback bud:)

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