Dinosaur Boy suddenly turned into a real detective fiction/murder/noir type drama. XD Two characters coming together though... bound to get interesting in the next one! Seems a bit shorter this one btw. Not that I mind. Long enough to be entertaining still. Looking forward to seeing where this all goes!
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We progressively get weirder, looking forward to what you hear on the next few episodes! The next one is a huge downer, and the fourth episode contains the weirdest scene I have ever written in the past three years of screenwriting. Should be an interesting ride.
In terms of length, I think episode two is the shortest of the season. Episode three clocks in at around six and a half minutes, episode four is around eight minutes and episode five is still in the editing bay. I like to believe that every episode is as long as it has to be.
Thanks for the review man! Looking forward to hearing what you think about the next one :)
Thought this'd be more of a parody on a commercial product really not working like it should, bot and all, but hey, some actual action! :D Good fun. Smooth animation. Smooth music. Not bad.
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thank you, I thought about it but I had already started doing the animation and I did not want to change the storyboard
apart I have more animations to do and I had to finish
This just gets better and better. :) Maybe the somewhat inconsistent style could be something to work on a bit though? For example how when the white dude bashes the other one on the ground at first the trails on the ground are white, but when he blasts off they're dark... seems strange it'd differ, even if it is a stylistic choice. There are a few things like that, though seems like less with the second fight, and the fights, woah, brutal! No mercy. One after the other though. They just keep coming.
Do like the variation, and the white one's got a trick up his sleeve too. Shadows... that part was unexpected. Doesn't seem like they really get along as well as possible though. XD Even with all that violence there's a little comedy to this after all...
Visually, the different angles, more detailed close-up shots and special effects (aftereffects?) really bring this to a whole new level. Considering how much work went into this it seems it really deserved a higher score! Maybe the first bit doesn't give a perfect first impression, as it really gets better and better the further it goes, but that is the right order too. Really a blast to watch this. Maybe also possible to improve: the expressions, when shown, often seem somewhat simple compared to the fights. Very reaction-based. And with the bone-breaking bits and brutal end scenes for all characters... not sure they add to it, somehow feels like a stickfigure fight doesn't usually go there. Maybe you'd relate more to the main character if he didn't show such murderous intent, really beating down on his foes even when it seems to be over?
Well, the larger whole of this: awesome. :D Can't wait for the next one! Whenever the time comes. Really shows how much work went into this too. Also, regarding not using the shadow clones earlier: I think that was a good choice. A good fighter keeps an ace up his sleeve if possible. If he didn't need them, which it didn't seem like he did, then it'd be good to keep them hidden until he did. Anyway, great work. Looking forward to what comes next.
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Thankyu for giving me your precious time..it means a lot for me you seen small small bit of my work.. so i am gratefull towards you.by the way thanks for your comment and i will inform you when ever the next part will release.
Well that went crazy fast. XD Despite the sometimes not always so solid visuals the animation's easy to follow, the scripts not bad, the sound design... it could use some static. The voices don't really fade in or out, but all come with background static that's just taken away suddenly, and the rest of it silent. Some noise reduction if you can, or better audio quality overall, would bring that bit to the next level! And the animation could use more detail, but it's good fun so far. Not bad.
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With some of the scenes the still images almost make it seem more like an animatic than an animation, but most of the time it goes well with the style. Was wondering where it would all lead after that introduction, and the random character introductions thereafter... sorry the dude with the banana had to be sacrificed for progress to be made but... seems to be getting interesting now!
Looking forward to seeing how this all pans out. My kind of comedy. The guys in the truck too: class.
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Hey Cyberdevil!
Recognise ya from reviewing a game I posted up in '16 or so! Happy to see you're still around!
The animatic look was intended, the original scope of the project was completely in animatic form but as time went on we added a bit of motion to make the visuals flow better.
Happy you're enjoying the story, it goes some pretty weird places pretty quickly.
Looking forward to hearing what ya think of episode 2!
Thanks for the review!
So short but: not bad! :) Looking forward to seeing the full thing all together.
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The full thing is already out ;)
What a happy6 vibe with this one. :D Heartfelt but packed with comedy too, and the animation's all solid too. Some of the lipsync though... at least a few moments where the mouth didn't really seem to follow the world. But: minor details. Some of the song wasn't all that easy to catch either so if it is a play on that: not bad! It goes together nicely overall. Good music. Good fun.
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Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it. :D
The sprite animation itself isn't bad, but I feel you could really be presenting it better! Transitions between animations, but most of all: bit more work on splash screens and texts. The beginning really looks... really basic! Keep it going!
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Thanks for the honesty! This is my 1st attempt, hopefully I’ll improve em down the line :)
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