Hmm, that kinda spiraled out of control. :/ Plotwise not much is happening, it seemed like a good premise for something to happen, but it never really does. He goes over to the car, goes back, changes topic... feels like there's a lot of talking (a lot of repeating topics and phrases too) but very little getting somewhere, within and outside the speech. Graphics work with what's being said, but on their own they're not too amazing, feels like at least some color might liven things up a bit. Speech never stops, which is good, but it doesn't entertain as much as I hoped it would. Keep it going!
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