Ooh I remember this one! Wish the other one was still online so I could go back and compare and really see the differences (could change the name on that to something like 'The Monster (Original)'... maybe? But it does feel improved! The darkness is more perceptible this time around, I imagine there's more sound; atmosphere, and the monster jumping into the girl at the end... feels like it ended differently last time, though I can't remember how? Overall looks good!
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