Heh, badass intro coming soon too? :P And heeey, that paper brings with it great hopes and revelations! Awesome. Also a pretty solid script, the one pun nicely presented after that one punch. Whatever happened to the voice act though? Writing works, but sound is on another level entirely. As for the 'save me' on the umbrella, bit strange it's on the umbrella? Was the umbrella controlling the guy, or the guy the umbrella, or was he simply locked up and had to be punched out to be free? If so, it's weird he'd initiate a fight, and not just ask the grand OPS to blow a hole in the wall.
Bit baffling that part, but overall this was grand. Short but nicely done! Also: one more thing that'd add to the graphics I thiink: is background, one that stretches further, horizons, objects far away that add to the sense of distance and dimension. Looking forward to the next ep!
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