Well, as you do mention the voice acting isn't the best, it's aoverpowered a bit by the music, it's low and not always as distinguishable as it could be, but the animation was all better! Great work on fluent movements, backgrounds and everything. A brutal side-step. Weird irrelevant character references towards the end (Barney? You're still alive?!). Entertaining; slightly random! And seemed like it'd turn out very differently than it did (as in: good surprise effect). Keep it going!
-cd-