Well that was... uneventful. XD Was thinking his head might explode from all that focus, or something... the motions come across alright though, to focus on that. He starts a bit too still, but once he starts moving it's good. When his chest is heaving btw: it should affect more of his body. Head bobbing slightly, shoulders up and down, if he's breathing right also his stomach. Good start though!
-cd-