Cyberdevil's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[sythe-10]

Ironic that it ended with this one this year... that wasn't the plan was it? Bit of a peak on the volume in the middle, distracts a bit, but otherwise maybe the most introspective one yet...

I did enjoy these! Feels like both intensity and articulation kept improving since the beginning too. That's how I've been feeling with each one of these so far, consistently getting better and better, that it gets easier and easier, eventually the stress of putting out a new one each day starts going away... but then at some point it also stops feeling as inspiring. Gets harder to really push yourself to keep going either way. Like the early anticipation was a part of that pressure you also lost. But, you just have to keep going anyway, that's how you really surpass yourself...

Relate heavily with this. I'm not sure my ratings are all fair with these, conflicting impressions in regard to audio production and to the message itself, since the latter's been solid with every single one of these. But I did enjoy all. Easy; inspiring listening all the way...

If you feel like trying this again, again do let me know. ;) Would be fun to follow.

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davidpuralocura responds:

lol i didnt notice i stoped with sythe kinda like i killed it it it has been killed
the plan was to keep going till the end but idk things change
thank you for enjoying these

[synchronicity-9]

You are improving! :D Warming up. Another good one.

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[paradox-8]

Definitely is! Felt like some stumbles with the 'being' and ending, but solid intensity/annunciation otherwise.

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[valorant-7]

Feels like a real effort in articulation with this one, nice!

Is this inspired by a particular game...? Curious which one if so...

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davidpuralocura responds:

valorant and i play omen

[art-6]

Working with symmetrical pieces like this they get pretty hypnotizing too. :P All that's off are really those occasional pops and articulation! Another good one.

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[silence-5]

It's almost like a meditation session... maybe a bit slower would've made this even better? I could definitely use some more of those moments...

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[this dude-4]

Ah man the consistency with the message and whomesomeness with these so far... on point. Regarding structure I wouldn't mind a more poetry-based style of speech with this, it goes well with the format I think, if you want to opt for rap entirely it might help to try to keep a consistent/similar amount of syllables with each line, that's generally how you can manage to keep a flow that's also consistent. Either way though so far these are pretty inspiring...

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davidpuralocura responds:

yeah you are right that i am more experienced on poetry than
rap but not much people like lisening to poetry rap is kinda more fun in that way

[rankup-3]

One potential grammar fix here: there is where we take a deep breath -> this is where we take a deep breath. ;) Pointing that out feels in tune with the message somehow...

Recording quality felt a bit lower on this one, flow stumbled a bit on points, but not bad. The message's all on point roo... and ranks, can relate! XD

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[sleep-2]

Yeaaah... both more melody and more length with this compared to the first one! Started out as rap and ended a bit more like poetry/spoken word. :) Conclusive too. Facts.

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[start]

Hell yeah! :D Great message. Seems like articulating everything in English might be the big challenge for you though, the writing's great, the pace too, though seems you get stuck on certain syllables/pronunciations a bit along the way. Curious if you tried multiple times on this? Is this the first take entirely? When I do these I usually end up recording around anywhere from 3-20 times on each one, sometimes more depending on how complex the structure is, it's not easy to get it right away even if you're used to the language, and I feel at least a few takes works as warm up, so your tone gets a bit deeper and more prominent too. Sometimes. Sometimes it doesn't work anyway! Just gotta put out what you have regardless then... of course there's something special about it really being the one and only if that's what you're going for! As real as it gets.

But this is what it's all about! Really cool to hear you jumped on this, and especially when it seems you might be getting out of your comfort zone doing so. If you do jump aboard next year too let me know and I'll tune in from the start, could maybe swap some inspiration along the way, didn't realize anyone was doing this in parallel this year, been too busy with my own...

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davidpuralocura responds:

ineed i dont have the best english
it is kinda inposible to get in on the first try
but eventualy i get something decent