Quality of that first verse was on a whole new level! :D Syllable count and presentation and everything. Felt like the voice was a bit too up front/high at first, the kind of thing a mastering thing might fix, but recording quality sounds better too otherwise. Not too much reverb. Good tone.
Not a huge fan of the second chorus getting all slurred up, works better towards the end IMO, and the hooker accent's hmm... not totally authentic (maybe you could use some filters on the voice? Change the pitch?), but overall! Impressed! These are really getting better and better. Energy's great. Build's great. Length's just right. I like the grunge vibe. The instrumentation's not too flat or predictable. Switches good. I like that distant layer with higher tones, whatever you'd call that. Was thinking the strumming sound (the bass?) was a bit too noticeable in the beginning, and stumbled at one point, but that impression disappears when it all really starts up.
Trying to decide if I'd appreciate this more with less obscene lyrics but that's part of the image innit... did enjoy it.
Looking forward to whatever's up next.
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