Cyberdevil's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[this dude-4]

Ah man the consistency with the message and whomesomeness with these so far... on point. Regarding structure I wouldn't mind a more poetry-based style of speech with this, it goes well with the format I think, if you want to opt for rap entirely it might help to try to keep a consistent/similar amount of syllables with each line, that's generally how you can manage to keep a flow that's also consistent. Either way though so far these are pretty inspiring...

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davidpuralocura responds:

yeah you are right that i am more experienced on poetry than
rap but not much people like lisening to poetry rap is kinda more fun in that way

[rankup-3]

One potential grammar fix here: there is where we take a deep breath -> this is where we take a deep breath. ;) Pointing that out feels in tune with the message somehow...

Recording quality felt a bit lower on this one, flow stumbled a bit on points, but not bad. The message's all on point roo... and ranks, can relate! XD

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[sleep-2]

Yeaaah... both more melody and more length with this compared to the first one! Started out as rap and ended a bit more like poetry/spoken word. :) Conclusive too. Facts.

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[start]

Hell yeah! :D Great message. Seems like articulating everything in English might be the big challenge for you though, the writing's great, the pace too, though seems you get stuck on certain syllables/pronunciations a bit along the way. Curious if you tried multiple times on this? Is this the first take entirely? When I do these I usually end up recording around anywhere from 3-20 times on each one, sometimes more depending on how complex the structure is, it's not easy to get it right away even if you're used to the language, and I feel at least a few takes works as warm up, so your tone gets a bit deeper and more prominent too. Sometimes. Sometimes it doesn't work anyway! Just gotta put out what you have regardless then... of course there's something special about it really being the one and only if that's what you're going for! As real as it gets.

But this is what it's all about! Really cool to hear you jumped on this, and especially when it seems you might be getting out of your comfort zone doing so. If you do jump aboard next year too let me know and I'll tune in from the start, could maybe swap some inspiration along the way, didn't realize anyone was doing this in parallel this year, been too busy with my own...

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davidpuralocura responds:

ineed i dont have the best english
it is kinda inposible to get in on the first try
but eventualy i get something decent

[Battle Me (nachomix)]

It's that Nachomix with the sickest dips! For the business kids with the richest bids! Who like beasts all feast on cold beats like this while they roll down streets smoking reef. Err.

Running out of tolerable rhymes with each one of these wallopings I find but: this is dope! :) Thanks for making this too!

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larrynachos responds:

I haven't noticed the slightest decline in your sublime rhymes! Finish strong!

Thanks for the opportunity to work with you! I love what we've created here!

[A cold day in hell]

This is reaaaally good! Melancholy vibe, steady beat... big MGK fan too. Solid work with this.

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RAMUSH responds:

Gonna keep on making you proud homie.

[Funny Clowns!]

Ah this turned out way better than I expected too! XD Chutney with that impeccable flow! Suitable lo-fi filter. Good balance with the volume. the beat doesn't take away from the vocal performance, entertaining all the way, optimal pace and length and everything. What a blast.

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[Kame Killah]

Such a bad-ass beat. :) It sounds like a serum of truth... wild and free. This is great.

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[NG '98]

Heavy Endless Handbag Loop vibes here! :D With plenty a varied brooding vibe intertwined. I did recognize the inspiration before I saw the related audio here, really! Heavy nostalgia. Love it.

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