Well this was way longer than expected! Pretty twisted too. With the face shifting and random moments right from the start you know something's about to go down but... can't say I really follow the comedy when it does. It seems to just portray Wallace in the worst possible way, without much redeeming story to go with it... I appreciate the effort that went into this, but those intended laughs became frowns, uncomfortable moments and confusion instead. I understand the value of Gallows humor, but didn't expect it this would class as that. Props on all the time spent on this, and it did entertain, but I feel like it could use a clearer direction and relatable puns if it really intends to be comedy. Feels pretty experimental.
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