Thought it was going to reach some grand conclusion, but it feels like it ended pretty abruptly right after the banana fight! Didn't get a chance to really live into the main characters despair in that short time, and half a banana... didn't seem like that bad an ending. Seemed like a glimpse of hope! And didn't he have a home at the beginning? Why leave it? No insurance? Felt like a lose end, but anyway...
The story does put things in perspective, and I think that thick rain might've been the first rain I've seen that actually looked heavy, nice effect. The FBF isn't always the most smooth, but the fact that it IS entirely FBF animation is pretty impressive! Nice work.
-cd-