Cyberdevil's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fly Way]

Hah, if ever that happened in real life! XD I thought the fly'd endlessly attempt that attack on the window, one first long rush and then again, and again, faster and faster... glad it shattered my expectations and surprised! Really nice short.

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SmokingFrog responds:

I'm glad you like it! Cool idea, by the way. If i manage to do a remake, I'll use it 😉

[Chris And David 2| Halo!]

Bit hard to hear what the animator's saying with hat morphed voice of his, background sometimes don't fill the entire screen, line-works a bit sketchy/unevenly thick/etc and animation not always the smoothest, but it did entertain! Plenty oh humor in the script. Keep it going!

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MicroMashons responds:

I just rewatched the cartoon! THis is not supposed to happen! Hold on. I'm going to fix it.

[Guice & Mikey Go To Bdubs]

So eh, yeah... I think I'm missing the pun here? Felt like something fun could've happened after that transition but, they're there, that's it..? Btw, volume between the two characters could use some balancing, you barely hear the one guy at the end. Keep it going!

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BillionthVirus responds:

That's their characters. Guice is quiet, calm and logical. Mikey is loud, obnoxious and acts on impulse. About the plot, it was something I improvised in audacity and decided to animate. If I ever make a sequel, I will put more thought into it.

[Birds derping Angry Birds]

Hah, random dialog combined with a simple scene of Angry Bird failure... is a fun combination as it turns out! :D Could use some more polishing on the lip-syncing though err... beak-syncing. Keep it going!

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RedAndrew responds:

Yeah, this ws my first flash one of the first flash cartoons, so that's why it sucks, but I am kinda getting better :D

[John The Fisherman]

Hmm, seemed like a thoughtful contemplation at first, made sense, was enjoying the edgily ambient style of animation, but when it zooms out and reveals the background cemetary I start to wonder... what does that mean? Is that a visual representation of everyone he's lost? Is it an actual cemetary, in which case it'd be odd if the main character does ask him? Could he be a ghost? Could one of those crazy theories, like him reliving the same day over and over... maybe hold some truth to it? Really boggles up the simplicism at the end there, but I like how it turns to afterthought! Nice work.

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Gerkinman responds:

This comment is exactly what I was trying to achieve, almost word for word what I told myself I wanted to convey, I think this comment makes this short my most successful ever.

[FEAR: Claustrophobia]

Seems like there are more phobias mixed in herre, fear of not being able to move, fear of drowning... it's a pretty dark animation, albeit with that beautiful scene right after. The way he wakes up again, I guess he's not actually in a tiny cubicle, just crazy. The expression doesn't seem the most despairful, but the voice does, nice work!

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charliemakescartoons responds:

Yeah the first thing I'll fix is the expression. Also I can dig your interpretation of the ending.

Thank you for watching. :)