Thought that roach was a caterpillar at first. XD The ground moves a bit much when they're outside too, and clay looks a bit gray? Other than that the mation's masterful, great detail, and plot eh... well it was entertaining! Is it maybe based on a real experience? If not seems kind of random. The spontaneous approach might work for a longer piece, or with a particular ending, but this is a bit abrupt... not really getting the message if there is one; relying on description to get the full story. Love the work, but script so so.
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