This is a nice tune, smooth and ambient yet full of energy. Would be perfect for a fast-paced platformer... maybe even a racing game. It's easy listening to over and over, nice work!
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This is a nice tune, smooth and ambient yet full of energy. Would be perfect for a fast-paced platformer... maybe even a racing game. It's easy listening to over and over, nice work!
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Thanks, I'm glad you like it!
The first 2-5 seconds were great, hope you don't get rid of them even if they weren't intentional. It's a nice intro, and after that it really picks up. I like the melody, but it feels like there's something missing. Might be a beat, or some form of bass/wave. Not sure, but keep it going!
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Thanks for the feedback
Does this have anything to do with the Madness Day occasion? If it does, it doesn't have much similarity other than the name though. In itself, it's a tune that plays with a mind, steady yet constantly morhping, mystifying, taking you into a new dimension. Reminds me a bit of the classic Doom music. Not sure I like the way the whatever-instrument-that-pops-up /?) around 1:30 takes over the show though, it ruins the mood a bit, too sharp somehow. Apart from that. Great work!
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It doesn't have anything to do with madness day.
thanks for your criticism.
happy day for ya
This is how I picture the sound of wonder sounds. Really nice, smooth, ambient, with a melody that you can almost hear beckons to question. It's like a rain of falling stars, or looking out of a moving train, or floating around in space... great atmosphere!
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thank you very much ...glad you liked it ...more coming very soon !
Sounds like Madness alright. Nice tension in the music, nice variation in the pace with the beat kicking in occasionally. It'd be the perfect fit for Madness movies/games. Nice work!
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Thank you.
Sounds good, intense from the start, varied, full of energy. The melody reminds me of some game but I can't recall which one... some Mortal Kombat theme maybe. It's a sinister tune, Asian-ish... I like the trippy beat. Not sure how I like the ringing sound that constantly pierces through the background ambiance, but apart from that it's great. Keep it going!
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Thank you for the review... I didn't know that it may sound asianish but it I did listen to some anime soundtracks recently.
This is a funky beat, smooth and rhythmical, oldskool and industrial. After the first twentyfive seconds or so it becomes a bit bland though, maybe due to a lack of bass. The experimental hit-hats and other stuff towards the end is pretty funky, I can imagine this in a track. Nice work!
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You are glorious.
I like the flow in this, the pace and melody, but the sound feels way too sharp. Some more ambient instrument/pitch seems to me would sound much better combined with the overall very ambient experience. As for the points you bring up, I like the beginning, it starts off directly, but it still fades in, no fuzz. With a more ambient instrument/pitch, the first time the instrument kicks in it also wouldn't seem so sharp. At times it is a bit slow, maybe speed it up a bit? As for an end, how about a short solo and then just... fade away. This really doesn't sound like house, I'd sort it as Ambient or New Wave, or Experimental/Misc. There are plenty of sub-genres to the existing genres, but listing them all would make it a pain to browse through. Anyway, nice track. Keep it going!
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Thanks for reviewing my song man. I'll be sure to keep your suggestions in mind as I do more with it!
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Nice! Both lyrics and music are good, but the voice feels really distant. The voice is a bit tense too, not too bad but still more like talking than singing. It works well for the verses but it would be nice with some more vocalism in the chorus. Have you tried that? Even if you can't sing it'd liven up the piece. :) Everything syncs well overall, and it's complete with a solo towards the end. Nice work!
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I'm not much of a singer yeah. haha I tried to do the song in a more Alestorm style, but now that you mention it....it could benefit from more vocalism(neat word btw) on the chorus.
Pretty strong lyrics in this one, and a strong voice - though it sounds a bit strained when it peaks toward the end, good music overall, the guitar solo is fairly simple but it's still an appreciated addition, it adds some liveliness at the end. The song starts a bit slow, and the drums are a bit basic. No build-ups at all in the beat at the beginning, just with the other instruments. I think that'd add a lot to the music, keep it going!
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You're right that the drums are very basic, but in a song like this one I don't know if there much more you can do with the drums than keeping it simple and basic.
As for it the song starting slow, I can only say that it pretty much what it was intended to be. It's a soft rock ballad type of song. So I guess it pretty much a hit or miss.
Any way thank you for the review.
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