Impressed with the instrumental bit, even if I miss some of the bridges with the former (definitely more manageable with this length though), but the vocal sounds kind of hazy! And not consistent in volume all the way through. The shouting bits sound good, the lo-fi sound works great there, but with the verses it's a bit distant, wonder if a mic upgrade would be necessary to get the same quality with both vocals and instruments or if it's maybe just all in the mixing/practice...
Definitely getting that punkrock sound otherwise. :D And the mixing has some depth/weight/bass to it too. Not bad.
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