Cyberdevil's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Techno Trio]

This is one loooong track! Takes a while for the rhythm to really bring me in, but when the VG-style influences start appearing it's great, energetic and melodious. The shifts are impossible to notice too, everythings smoothly pieced together, but no doubt it bids for a lot of variation. Nice initiative!

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[Asslevania]

Woo, it's awesome what some narrative can add to a dubstep track. Sounds great, choppy and energetic. keep it going!

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[{!RGH} -+[ Lovely <3 ]+-]

Beautiful voice, sharp and clear recording quality, pretty lovely lyrics too! I was a bit bugged by how the musical rhythm doesn't really seem to be the best fit for the lyrical melody though, it feels like the beat is either too fast, or there aren't enough instruments moving at a slower pace. Some guitar would definitely be a nice addition, or any other strings that don't 'skip' as the music does. Keep it going!

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RyeGuyHead responds:

Methinks the World has not heard the last of Something Lovely ;)

[{!RGH} -+[Uncertainty]+-]

This was beautiful, an ambient melody to back up a powerful vocal venture, the different vocal layers work well at giving it some kind of otherworldly touch, style reminds me a bit of Hania. Btw, who wrote the lyrics, is that LadyArsenic as well? It's nice, poetically atmospheric. Feels like you could've used that musical solo space for something more pompous, but it's great as it is too, subtle and consistent. Nice work!

RyeGuyHead responds:

I composed everything (including the lyrics). LadyArsenic added her flare to my original vocal melody and really took the song to another level.

Glad you liked it. Thanks for the review!

[Growing Impatient]

The first two lines didn't really sync, but after that everything flows perfectly, and the seven eight nines are a fun finale. I'm thinking maybe you could breath in more and add some volume to your voice though? Either way this is great, good beat, no filler lyrics, great track! And yeah the musical industry is hard to get into, it's the dream life with demand for only a selected few so of course there's tons of competition. Keep it going though!

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Teqneek responds:

Thanks for the review man, I appreciate the advice!

As a matter of fact, I'm presently in the process of rewriting and re-recording this track, and improving a lot of things.

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CHANGES TO BE MADE:
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A rewrite and re-recording of verse one (More Energy, More Clarity, Less Braggadocio), complete with some sweet-ass rhyme revisions!
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A second verse will be added!
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The hook will be re-recorded!
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The instrumental will be tweaked to sound better!
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MAY speed the beat up a little

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tl;dr: REMAKE DROPPIN' SOON SOON!

[Voice Demo 2013 -TonashDrahow-]

Sounds like it's pretty easy for you to delve into new accents and personas, great acting! And en entertaining reel for it. Keep it going!

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Tonash responds:

Thanks very much! :D

[Choices]

This sounds good, smooth and atmospheric, a bit tense until the melody shifts around the minute. It turns into a happier melody than I'd expected, kinda wonder how it would've turned out if you kept the tension, but it sounds good. The drums are a trippy but nicely synced addition. Keep it going!

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PANFLETIN responds:

thanks dude, it took a while with the drums and i guess that later i can try to keep the tension, i have some ideas to work with

[Chased By Monsters]

This is a nice tune, smooth and ambient yet full of energy. Would be perfect for a fast-paced platformer... maybe even a racing game. It's easy listening to over and over, nice work!

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FateModified responds:

Thanks, I'm glad you like it!

[Goddess of Creation]

This was a powerful piece, a melody that morphs and seemingly moves me through serene sceneries soothing with clean green beauty. I can imagine this in a movie, not necessarily a boss fight, just anything majestic A city in the clouds. Eldorado. Crystal caves. Center of the world. Journey to the stars. Nice work!

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[The great]

The first 2-5 seconds were great, hope you don't get rid of them even if they weren't intentional. It's a nice intro, and after that it really picks up. I like the melody, but it feels like there's something missing. Might be a beat, or some form of bass/wave. Not sure, but keep it going!

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muchomania responds:

Thanks for the feedback