That alarm towards the end was an interesting addition. XD It's like this is all a dream, and you're just waking up as it starts to reach an end; is over... it's an interesting detail but I'm not sure it adds to the music as much as it distracts, though.
The rest of the melody was great. Soft and harmonious tunes, a smooth and very living melody that keeps morphing as it moves along - with sessions of ambience between the brighter sections. It all flows together nicely, and the sound quality and balance is just perfect, though I do feel it gets a bit repetitive after a whole. The beat's great, the music's great, but the core melody just loops over and over. Even in those fiercer parts there seems to be some remnant of it that lingers... it never truly breaks off into something different. and both of those seem the same. Reoccurring phases. Conclusively I'd say I love everything about this except for the alarm sound and the overall arrangement: feels like it could be more dynamic! Keep up the great work.
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