You definitely chose an interesting piece to make music for! :D First pixel art I see in the contest. The introduction seems to capture the calm of it. The beautiful sunset. The waves. The boats in the distance. A serene scene... that slowly morphs into something else as you notice the fire on the right side. Something's wrong. Subtle shiver. It keeps building, but never turns to full-out chaos, just like with the picture, it's an almost unnoticeable threat you suddenly discover, the brooding starts... but it never transcends into chaos all the way. The ending: all up to you.
I really like the mood here. It's subtle, and soft, but masterfully brooding after that initial, almost jazzy ambience. Paints the night well, and the gap is seamless before the tension starts. It has an industrial tone to it too, so I'm curious if that's what you went for after the initial phase, or if it's anything like the impression I had above? Great sound work, great balance; great composition overall. The latter part in particular. Really like the tension there.
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