Cyberdevil's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[#253 | At Bay]

Interesting. Looks like a mixture between a character and some kind of... planet? the ground has a glassy feel to it. Nice colors, nice shapes, nice work!

-cd-

Anchorwind responds:

Thanks for taking the time to respond. No character, directly - but it is implied. I'm glad you enjoyed!

[Team Rocket's Furry]

Looking good! Mixing together an animal with a regular character like this worked well. I suppose it symbolizes foxiness? Great shape and shading. Nice work!

-cd-

AuraSorceressKitsora responds:

It's hard to explain because my style doesn't fully show it; she's actually a wolf. I based the colors off of Holo from Spice and Wolf.

[The Pirate Beauty]

Nice mixture of fantasy (I'm referring to the elf-like element) and history. The suit does have a piraty form to it, but otherwise there isn't much to show that she's a pirate. No sword, no eyepatch (more like a hairpatch), no crew or ship in the background. She looks good though, legeant and refined. Keep it going!

-cd-

AuraSorceressKitsora responds:

The reason she looks so good is because, and I suppose I should have stated that, she is the captain. And I haven't come up with the designs of her crew, because her crew consists of revamped versions of other characters I have. It's just based on an RP. XD

[Jack in the BOXXX]

Rule 1 about being scouted is: don't ask to be. :) As for the artwork itself, looks good! You have a pretty unique style to your drawings, and they're also usually an abstract mixture of different objects, like this. The clown is demonically creepy, and that smiley face on the box doesn't change the impression either. :D The drawing is detailed, but also a bit rough and unrefined, edges aren't always smooth and proportionate, but maybe that's part of the style. Keep it going!

-cd-

ZabuJard responds:

thanks champ

[get down its a snip-]

It always surprises me that people can make good art with that program. This looks good, nice and spritey. Apart from the missing background everything is crisp and smooth. The parrot creeping on the ledge there is a comical addition. :D Keep it going!

-cd-

HiZtory responds:

thanks man :)

[Park Serenity]

It looks good, nice and crisp graphics, a bit different from the regular pixel landscape too, maybe the patterns but more noticably the forms on clouds and tree top and even the birds. The flower looks particularly great, so simple, so shining. Have you thought about making sprites for a game? Looks good!

-cd-

Mr-McGifford responds:

Thanks so much for the review!

Umm, I haven't actually thought about doing sprites for a game, I'm actually more of a programmer haha.

[Pirate hunter Zoro]

Woo, the aspiring swordsman, one of the greatest anime characters ever! He's a bit simple. Working with outlines that aren't so noticeable, with other colors than just black, and shading even for minor details would improve it a lot. Shade doesn't always have to be black either. Practice makes perfect. As for the pirate logo, that looks perfect in vector format. Not the strawhat emblem, but a cool one regardless. Zoros own? Keep it going!

-cd-

OldNGrip responds:

Thanks for the feedback I also agree that this is very simple and i was trying to replicate the shading style used in the manga so that why i made it so black i kinda rushed this one. Thanks for some very helpful constructive criticism.

[Jerry: Old and New]

Nice to see both submissions on the same page and compare the differences! The right one definately looks better than the left. He doesn't just look better defined but also bigger, but at the same time it's like two different styles in the different pictures. One thing I thought was pretty cool with the 09 version were the blue glasses, they really glow. On the right one they do look more realistic, but the whole picture is also dark, I feel it would be nice with some color added!

The black line separating the lips on the right one looks a bit odd when there aren't any real outlines elsewhere, otherwise it looks great, the facial features look realistic and professional, as does the shirt. The afro looks.. unreal, but then again, don't all afros? :) Much better shading on the hair in the new one! Keep it going!

-cd-

animezoneking responds:

Thank you :) This is the style I have been working with, but I like the idea of more vibrant colors, I will more than likely make a new one soon that balances the styles. Thank you for the critique, I appreciate it a lot! :)