Cyberdevil's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fries]

Eating fries will just never be the same after this. XD

I like how they all have different expressions too... and one trying to escape. Forms feel a little wonky but this is just full of life and expression too. Fun to view.

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[Welcome to 2025]

2024 appears dark and fargone; the signs of the future bright and welcoming. :)

Nice symbolism. The spotlight, or road line shining in the doorway for the past year though... wouldn't it be better with a spotlight on the 2025 sign instead? An arrow pointing at the sign, too? Seems a bit odd that certain focus is on the old, even though the new's visible highlighted.

You definitely still get the gist of it though! Good promo for the Great New Year.

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[Artist's chronic procrastination]

Can relate. XD

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[Bomb.png]

The thing about the bomb not being centered on the canvas when there's nothing there but the bomb, and it's a symmetrical form otherwise hmmmm...

Nice bomb though.

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[Flabbergasted, befuddled, shocked, stunned, and bewildered 2]

You really nailed that expression! :D The background too... fits in nicely. A little gritty, growing dark, a somewhat distorted show of the ground; green Earth overall...

Hair blends into the background a bit maybe, and neck seems very thick compared to body.

Overall nicely done!

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[War pipes]

Really nailed the glow and shadow with this one, and the form overall, the cuts...

It looks good! Personally I'd consider having the same spacing between the pipe and the edge of the screen on both the left and right, but otherwise it looks just perfect to me.

Of course, some action or object beyond the pipes would take it to another level too. ;)

Nice work.

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[Watercolored cliffside]

This was nice. :) Good texture, simple forms but real soothing composition overall... good color.

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GamerM12345 responds:

Thanks, some imperfections like the cliff having being all the way at the bottom and some patches in the cliff so the backgrounds is visible but considering this is my first time doing digital watercolor I’m sure it can be “brushed off”.

[UnitedComics #4 - Spontaneous Combustion]

Swallowing a lithium battery really doesn't seem like the wisest thing to do for sure... XD

Possible improvement here: having the guy who spontaneously combusts appear in the background before he combusts? Just walking regularly? For example just standing, looking at a battery in the first frame, casually swallowing it in the second, and then...

A little cluing in in advance and this'd be even better IMO. :)

Nice one though.

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GamerM12345 responds:

Yeah that could’ve worked better, I also envisioned the guy passing the other guy as he’s on fire. Could have made it so that the scream slowly appears as he’s out of frame. Thanks for the suggestions!

[untitled #6717375 (Mario)]

Pretty much a spot on re-interpretation of classic Mario. :) I wonder about the light gray/green bits above his arms though, if they really add t it or no... there's the one slightly lighter pixel on his left hand too that seems a little misplaced with the otherwise seemingly intentionally limited color scheme. And the white's very bright... wonder how it'd be with a different background color...

This'd work nicely as an avatar too, good format.

Keep it up!

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GamerM12345 responds:

I realized before that was supposed to be the green parts that I didn’t finish or slightly erased(for some reason). I could’ve fixed it and I did, but I felt like fixing more of it and by the end it somehow looked WORSE! I could replace the files with the “improvement” or remake, but I think it’s okay.

[Me, Myself & Us]

This is just amazing. Color, form, expression. It looks good and says so much more than it seems to be drawn to say... impressive work!

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