Hah, if you add in a new character and 'again' to this loop each time you procrastinate it might amount to an unsuprassable amount of animated loops! XD Looks good but, this time the concept of procrastination is all the clearer. ;)
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Hah, if you add in a new character and 'again' to this loop each time you procrastinate it might amount to an unsuprassable amount of animated loops! XD Looks good but, this time the concept of procrastination is all the clearer. ;)
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yeah thats the point of this series.
The joke spans not just one toon, but multiple ones across time. Like a dead horse joke.
Hmm, no voice at the end there? Is there supposed to be? Feels like it ends pretty suddenly, and man what a brutal turn of events! :O Dodn't seem so serious at first, the entire riot was almost comical until that fateful dose of frying oil. Bit simple animation, but it works. Voicing's not bad either, but close to clipping at times, keep it going!
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hey thanks! i really appreciate the response. i messed up with the voice at the end and it's super quiet. it's definitely there though!
An impressive; perfectly synced sequence of action! With plenty of humor too, like that cooking part. XD Even though you mentioned the credits were long, I wasn't expecting that long! Like two thirds of the submission length!! :O Though I enjoyed the action, it felt like I was cheated of it when those started rolling, might be one of those rare occasions where a submission format without timeline would've been wholly better. Anyway, loved the fight, appreciate all the hard work gone into arranging this, and I believe it should've scored much much better than this! Nice work.
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Thank you very much for respond, Cyberdevil! I am sorry about long credits, i thought they would go much faster when i wrote them. Unfortunally, i didn't find what to delete of those credits, because everyone in this list was precious for me. It was long long time and everyone put a lot of effort in this. About rating - i know Newgrounds hate stick figure animations, but still people advised me to do this. Thank you for your respond again. I appreciate it!
That day ended better than I expected it would! All nice and piece and contained enmity for the day... not even that the soda involuntarily shook up and fizzled and and made way for great destruction and mayhem. Nice; harmless entertainment!
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lmao, so that's what was going through his mind as he made his revelation? That's pretty heavy hmm... gravity of the situation. Hilariously disturbing.
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An impressive fight so far, though some it seems the characters are a bit slow to react on some occasions, like when the arrow hits the rock, or the knife hits the other guys comrade. I assume they're all trained to respond quickly and focus on the enemey, so their looking away for a second or two seems like too much. Otherwise, everything feels swift and realistic, and I like the fuzzy and naturally colorful backgrounds. Hoping for more story in the next episode, more about what's really going on. Nice work!
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Thanks for the review! Unfortunately I can't say much without spoiling the next couple of episodes, stay tuned :D
A nice mesh of madness, accompanied by masterful music! Good pace, lots of action and plenty of variation. Nice work!
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An impressive first episode! Animation, voicing, background music (Jabun! :D) is all equally impressive, and the story just as compelling, in the sense of mystery as much as the sense of simplicity. Looking forward to the second one!
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