That emotion comes across really well, despite the simple imagery. We're all weak in some ways, all with our own fears of failure and shame, but don't let it get to you; just keep pushing on! It was a bit long, told in monotone voice... but must have worked well for this particular topic since it never started getting dull. Relatable... yeah, maybe that's why. A common fear all artists share. The power of imagination's strong... and dark. May the bright side be with you.
-cd-