At times it sounds more like house than trance - gets a bit monotone and bassy, but overall I do like it. It's smooth, melodic, varied... there's nothing wrong with the beat itself, yet it has a bit of a 'flat' sound to it. Not sure if it's the instruments, or a lack of layers, or what exactly could help bring it to the next level, but feels like there's still some polishing to be done to bring out the sound in this as much as possible! Nice work so far.
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