You definitely have potential! :D Feels like you're holding back a bit here, or trying to keep the volume consistent for the sake of the recording... I imagine recording from a bit further away you might be really bring it all out? Or warming up a bit more to really use your diaphragm. The melody's great, clarity's great, articulation and empathy and everything, just seems a bit restrained. Also think vibrato works best with moderation, more when the emotion or intensity really calls for it. Another trick singers learn is not to pronounce the s's so much, especially the trailing ones, as they are more audible in recordings. Similar with any hard consonants, like t's. Probably some good tutorials on that floating around if you're interested. As is though: impressive voice. Feels pretty natural. Curious if you maybe have been doing any of this professionally? Lessons, etc? Hope to hear more.
Also would be nice with lyrics, didn't fully catch that part with the cest la vie rose... la vie ha rose...?
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