This is great though! The white line placement/shapes maybe not perfect, not emanating from the center in either a symmetrical manner or a swift and chaotic one, thinner at the center, thicker further away - not that they need to have any particular shape or straightness but they just come across a little forced - not the most fluent/visual perfection IMO. Even with chaos there's order...
But the background color's great! And the overall composition. I love the shift; the orange and pink and impending blackness. Gritty but colorful, like a sunset or a flag, an explosion, a notion, a growth, a radiance, a darkness, dirty but beautiful, searing and bright... if you keep testing the form I think you'll start getting some really good looking stuff with this style. Just the gradients are impressive. Edges too.
Feels like potential cover art in the making....
-cd-