Cyberdevil's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Doughnut Bait]

A doughnut again, yes please! :D Gotta leave this as an official review here too...

The fish sure was a colorful one now that it's in color, and the doughnut all sparkles. I like the greens too, though the way it brightens towards the upper edge of the woods... seems a bit odd with all that surrounding darkness. Guess sunlight must be seeping through somewhere that way though. The way the water's glowing it seems almost magic too.

One thing I react to: maybe the doughnut could've had a bit brighter a glow? More so than the fish? The way it is you might mistake his line of sight as being towards the fish more than the doughnut - it really shines! The fish, I mean.

Looks great but that's maybe the one somewhat distracting detail here. Would be a shame to uncolorize the fish, but maybe a little neon icing? Pink/orange? Not to put colors in your head! Nice work.

-cd-

KaileahPNelson responds:

*hands a another doughnut over* XD

Well if you look at the crosshatching between the background trees, you'll seeing the sky and its suppose to hold the illusion of a setting sun and its light peeking through leaves and brush...

Yeah, I have an idea about the doughnut, to give it more of a focus point;)
Hmmm, I never thought of a green or pink/orange icing. When I was making this I was eating a chocolate iced donut lol

Thanks for the review! You're the best lol☺☺☺☺

Edit: Doughnut is fixed;P

[One with the Spoop.]

But... how are you making those LEDs hover like that? Is it MAGIC?

That's a pretty cool pose.

-cd-

FraserMcNiven responds:

Spoople here.

Magnets.

Okay then.

[Fart 10 - Vivi]

The Nami one might've been good but this one, woah! :D It's not just the form, but the eyes, the color contrast... something about this just really shines. Great work on the hair as well. And maybe it's also the gaze, straying far away, to dreams, hopes and visions... maybe the ponderous pose... I don't know. Just all in all very appealing.

-cd-

Oh-Sama responds:

Thank you dear friend. Now I'm taking a small break before getting my ass back to work on your other commissions. I hope they can turn greater than this piece XD

[Fart 9 - Nami]

Nami looking smooth and sensual! Back to the original anime skin tone too, when everything was slightly more orange and oldskool. :P Not too complex but the form's on point! Nice one.

-cd-

Oh-Sama responds:

Thanks and I agree with you!

[The Golden One]

Form's good, but the oddly cut-out edges hmm... not certain about those! Is it meant to look like a golden frame... ah, read response below. Feeling like that bit could use a bit more polish. :P Otherwise not bad.

-cd-

Nana responds:

Thanks , while doing the edges , i was in a hurry for a class. So i could not do it on time.

[Winter Dance]

So the white blotches are, hmm, they're like... clouds with icicles beneath them...? I'm still a bit baffled by the background, but I'm digging the color otherwise! A cool blue and beautiful hue. Smooth and icy. The white dots and remnants along the edges almost feel like an enhancement too, more like sparkles than leftover canvas. Really nice.

If there's any thing to improve, apart from the still somewhat baffling background, maybe the forzen lake could have more of an icy surface texture? As it is it almost seems like an empty abyss - especially with how the strands of ice by the shore are reaching downwards more than outwards.

But overall: a dual sense cool. Nice one.

-cd-

KaileahPNelson responds:

Yup, the icicle clouds a bit of a baffling, if not unusual background choice.
And and yeah as for the my frozen lake, I'm still working on see the 3d effect to look right. Getting better everyday is all that I hope for lol
Thanks for reviewing this.

[Lava Dragon's Spa]

So that's how these guys relax. :) Explains why we don't see them too often too... they're simply lounging around at the source of our world. The center. The core of all.

Form and color on this one: it's just impeccable. Love the design, the detail and the fiery contrasts. Awesome work.

-cd-

KaileahPNelson responds:

lol yeah I thought it'd be an interesting one to capture. I'm very happy with the way he turned out too, trying to make him blend in but not so much that you couldn't see him.
Thank you, I'm glad to hear you liked it.

[Inktober2019 Day 31 - Ripe]

Had to skip a bit and see how this all ended. :) With a masterful, imaginative and somewhat morbid pumpkin-devouring Halloween scene of course (the main dragon in particular - very nice)!

I like the motive, and the choice of color, but it does seem a bit incomplete with the blotches of white that yet remain in back of it... for the signatures btw, have you thought of drawing them in, instead of having pre-written text? I imagine it'd really float into the image that way. You could follow curves and other edges in a way premade fonts don't really allow.

Anyway: a suitable seasonal finale, and work well done on the lot of these! Hope to go through the rest at a later time. Happy Halloween (again)!

-cd-

KaileahPNelson responds:

Haha yes, this one is a bit...morbid. R.I.P poor pumpkin but in the baby dragon's defense he just wanted to join in the Halloween spirit.

I felt the same too, about the blotches of white yet. When I was doing it, I wanted to captured to black and white always colored worlds collided into one but I don't think these peculiar piece cuts it so I'm working on re-colorizing him so I'll have a "remastered" drawing done soon.

I hope you see the rest too. I illustrated a lot of ones for humor and enjoyment as well as mystery and few other themes lol thanks for checking it out!

[Inkober2019 Day8 - Frail]

So serene... for some reason he gets me thinking of a Buddhist monk. Like the facial features radiate a wisdom beyond that of a mere baby. The form's great apart from the one pinky. Nice scene.

-cd-

KaileahPNelson responds:

Thank you.
Well, each illustration is suppose to tell a different story to each person and if that what you see, cool, I've accomplished my goal;)
Yeah I'm working on my form, truth be told that's my first baby drawing and that pinky....well I'm not too good with hands yet but I'm getting better. Hands are always a challenging body to draw.

[Inktober2019 Day7 - Enchanted]

I think there's an 'all' too much in the poem. ;)

Really enjoying these forest motives overall, and you really managed the perfrect signiture placement with this one.

The forms are great, the colors... some stark, but some somewhat dark. Some gradients somewhat bright. Maybe the grass could shift in a more grass-like hue? Maybe some mushrooms could be a different color, orange, yellow, a little speckles or shades (well there is one)? A little softer green on the mossy branches? A little color faded by sunlight on the tattered edge of her dress?

The motive's great but I seem to see the forest in somewhat different hues. Can't say this is wrong but those impressions they ruse. The trees with the moss, the leaves and the lost, the green and the grass, the free and the rash... think just looking at these motives is pretty therapeutic too. Grounded and imaginative. Another nice one.

-cd-

KaileahPNelson responds:

Gosh, I can't help by be a bit overjoyed by your attraction to details(not to same that I'm not, gosh do I pay to details...maybe a little to much lol). Most people when they comment on my work, don't really give much of a detailed comment like you did. I'm very happy with your review. I'm just breaking into digital painting so at the time I did these, I hadn't figured out shading and shadows. Grass though.....grass has always been my greatest and hardest challenge....
Perhaps I'll do a remaster of this too.
It you like, I'll have no problem doing it;P Then I can surprise you how much I've learned in the time making this. haha
Thank you again for the review.