Cyberdevil's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Wee Smear Test]

Not a bad loop! :D And seems like an interesting program... was thinking it might be a bit like the Wick Editor but it seems like a pretty different thing. Good to know about.

-cd

Nabella responds:

Thanks, it's always good to hear from you. Yeah, Flipnote was essentially a digital flipbook, but despite the limitations there are people who still go all out in producing some quality animations! For example: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9n7xLAOk8uU and https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ouFZBaHGQpg

It's really nuts seeing what people can accomplish when you just let them get their foot in the door.

[Fart 11 - Motoko]

Motoko's looking foxier than ever! :D Love that sideways glance, sensual pose, sci-fi suit and high tech weaponry... if there's anything that feels a bit odd it might be the rounding of her trigger hand/finger. And some hair strands seem a bit strange.

Them round forms elsewhere though... mmm.

I like the background gradient too, definitely adds depth compared to single color ones, but maybe the entirely white corner is a bit much? Light gray? Maybe a light purple/blue, would've been better? Thanks again for this!

-cd-

Oh-Sama responds:

Thanks friend, it took me so much time that I got very bored in the end and screwed the whole thing. For the hands it was tough for me because I suck at drawing them, even with the references I had I couldn't help myself much. I apologize for not delivering you a perfect piece. This could be a proof that farting is in fact a cheap imitation of real art. If you want you can now ask Motoko to press that trigger so she may end my sorrow hahaha XDDD

[Dorothea]

What a gaze! :D Pervasive. The hair, the hypnotizing stare, the suit with buttons and boots and all kinds of cute cahoots... the texture on the cloth seems a bit off, but otherwise I really like this one. Beautiful work.

-cd-

DidiEsmeralda responds:

Thank you,Cyberdevil I'm glad you like it

[Doughnut Bait]

A doughnut again, yes please! :D Gotta leave this as an official review here too...

The fish sure was a colorful one now that it's in color, and the doughnut all sparkles. I like the greens too, though the way it brightens towards the upper edge of the woods... seems a bit odd with all that surrounding darkness. Guess sunlight must be seeping through somewhere that way though. The way the water's glowing it seems almost magic too.

One thing I react to: maybe the doughnut could've had a bit brighter a glow? More so than the fish? The way it is you might mistake his line of sight as being towards the fish more than the doughnut - it really shines! The fish, I mean.

Looks great but that's maybe the one somewhat distracting detail here. Would be a shame to uncolorize the fish, but maybe a little neon icing? Pink/orange? Not to put colors in your head! Nice work.

-cd-

KaileahPNelson responds:

*hands a another doughnut over* XD

Well if you look at the crosshatching between the background trees, you'll seeing the sky and its suppose to hold the illusion of a setting sun and its light peeking through leaves and brush...

Yeah, I have an idea about the doughnut, to give it more of a focus point;)
Hmmm, I never thought of a green or pink/orange icing. When I was making this I was eating a chocolate iced donut lol

Thanks for the review! You're the best lol☺☺☺☺

Edit: Doughnut is fixed;P

[One with the Spoop.]

But... how are you making those LEDs hover like that? Is it MAGIC?

That's a pretty cool pose.

-cd-

FraserMcNiven responds:

Spoople here.

Magnets.

Okay then.

[Fart 10 - Vivi]

The Nami one might've been good but this one, woah! :D It's not just the form, but the eyes, the color contrast... something about this just really shines. Great work on the hair as well. And maybe it's also the gaze, straying far away, to dreams, hopes and visions... maybe the ponderous pose... I don't know. Just all in all very appealing.

-cd-

Oh-Sama responds:

Thank you dear friend. Now I'm taking a small break before getting my ass back to work on your other commissions. I hope they can turn greater than this piece XD

[Fart 9 - Nami]

Nami looking smooth and sensual! Back to the original anime skin tone too, when everything was slightly more orange and oldskool. :P Not too complex but the form's on point! Nice one.

-cd-

Oh-Sama responds:

Thanks and I agree with you!

[The Golden One]

Form's good, but the oddly cut-out edges hmm... not certain about those! Is it meant to look like a golden frame... ah, read response below. Feeling like that bit could use a bit more polish. :P Otherwise not bad.

-cd-

Nana responds:

Thanks , while doing the edges , i was in a hurry for a class. So i could not do it on time.

[Winter Dance]

So the white blotches are, hmm, they're like... clouds with icicles beneath them...? I'm still a bit baffled by the background, but I'm digging the color otherwise! A cool blue and beautiful hue. Smooth and icy. The white dots and remnants along the edges almost feel like an enhancement too, more like sparkles than leftover canvas. Really nice.

If there's any thing to improve, apart from the still somewhat baffling background, maybe the forzen lake could have more of an icy surface texture? As it is it almost seems like an empty abyss - especially with how the strands of ice by the shore are reaching downwards more than outwards.

But overall: a dual sense cool. Nice one.

-cd-

KaileahPNelson responds:

Yup, the icicle clouds a bit of a baffling, if not unusual background choice.
And and yeah as for the my frozen lake, I'm still working on see the 3d effect to look right. Getting better everyday is all that I hope for lol
Thanks for reviewing this.

[Lava Dragon's Spa]

So that's how these guys relax. :) Explains why we don't see them too often too... they're simply lounging around at the source of our world. The center. The core of all.

Form and color on this one: it's just impeccable. Love the design, the detail and the fiery contrasts. Awesome work.

-cd-

KaileahPNelson responds:

lol yeah I thought it'd be an interesting one to capture. I'm very happy with the way he turned out too, trying to make him blend in but not so much that you couldn't see him.
Thank you, I'm glad to hear you liked it.