Cyberdevil's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Jake, Alexa, and the Jelly Monster Episode 1.]

So far so good! :D Simple graphics, but the story's followable! Just not really sure what's happening in the last frame... high five moment? Flying into the sky...?

Regarding speech bubbles: it's good practice to have them in the order you read, so you don't need numbers to tell the reader which to read first. If you lead a speech bubble from one character you can place it on the opposite side of the screen to if they're in the wrong order by default, so the flow of dialog is as smooth as possible.

Story-wise it's not bad! Looking forward to part 2.

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TheFutursticPro responds:

Oh, uh, at the last frame, its probably a high five. :P
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[Akumi Character Sheet 2019]

Looking pretty slender! Smooth work, though without those extra boots those legs really do look loooong. Understand why she wields those now!

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MiltoniusArts responds:

Thank you! Yeah I'm liking both looks so she'll switch between tech boots and tech sneakers. :)

[Christmas Presents]

Can't not appreciate the style here! Such a mesh of texture, light and color. Looks nice.

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silenceartwork responds:

thank you! Im still struggling to find a good set up for my non-paintings

[Bowsette]

Bowsette looking great! Smooth work.

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Appelknekten responds:

Thank ya~!

[Princesses Christmas]

A very merry trio! :) The dress textures seems somewhat simple and not all cloth-like, but I do like the design otherwise! Smooth work. Happy Holidays!

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DidiEsmeralda responds:

Thank you Cyberdevil, I'm glad you like it

[Disgruntled Neko Girl]

Small fists make for large hurt though. :P Nice doodle! And of course I now wonder whatever whomever might've called her hmm... nice work.

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MLeth responds:

Oh yeah I guess that was an important detail to leave out! Someone called her cute! The audacity!

[Switch]

Looking pretty hooked there! Smooth work and symmetry. Looks good.

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Nubiananan responds:

Thank you very much!

[Old request]

White-haired/horned lady here looking good! Natural-looking body language too. Nice work.

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SoCarter responds:

Thanks! And congrats on being the first person here to comment on my work ;)

[Rachnera in swuimsuit]

Rachnera looking good! Smooth work.

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BlackSaikou responds:

first time uploading here, thanks man