Cyberdevil's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[that treacherous ice cream]

Not sure what role the ice cream plays in all of this, but I like it! XD Warm and steamy scene, with a hazy beach in the background... sunshine sizzling away as if on a summer day. It looks inviting!

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0chidori0 responds:

ajajaja xD well, the rol of the icecream is the make alei (The dragon) Jealous, because azure (the mermaid) pay more atention to the ice cream ant let his boy friend a little alonexD...and it´s not the first time xD

Thanks! glad you liket nvn! that the idea,To create a summer tempting climate <3, though they are not the dates indicated to post a drawing like this xD

pd: sorry for my very bad english ><u

[Krystal Kicks It]

Apart from the blue hair she's really reminding me of Air Master here. :) Same form and all, and a blazing light in the background to reflect the power of that kick... looks good!

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Newtypemo responds:

Glad you think so. The aesthetic works.

[Jake, Alexa, and the Jelly Monster Episode 1.]

So far so good! :D Simple graphics, but the story's followable! Just not really sure what's happening in the last frame... high five moment? Flying into the sky...?

Regarding speech bubbles: it's good practice to have them in the order you read, so you don't need numbers to tell the reader which to read first. If you lead a speech bubble from one character you can place it on the opposite side of the screen to if they're in the wrong order by default, so the flow of dialog is as smooth as possible.

Story-wise it's not bad! Looking forward to part 2.

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TheFutursticPro responds:

Oh, uh, at the last frame, its probably a high five. :P
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[Akumi Character Sheet 2019]

Looking pretty slender! Smooth work, though without those extra boots those legs really do look loooong. Understand why she wields those now!

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MiltoniusArts responds:

Thank you! Yeah I'm liking both looks so she'll switch between tech boots and tech sneakers. :)

[Christmas Presents]

Can't not appreciate the style here! Such a mesh of texture, light and color. Looks nice.

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silenceartwork responds:

thank you! Im still struggling to find a good set up for my non-paintings

[Bowsette]

Bowsette looking great! Smooth work.

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Appelknekten responds:

Thank ya~!

[Princesses Christmas]

A very merry trio! :) The dress textures seems somewhat simple and not all cloth-like, but I do like the design otherwise! Smooth work. Happy Holidays!

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DidiEsmeralda responds:

Thank you Cyberdevil, I'm glad you like it

[Disgruntled Neko Girl]

Small fists make for large hurt though. :P Nice doodle! And of course I now wonder whatever whomever might've called her hmm... nice work.

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MLeth responds:

Oh yeah I guess that was an important detail to leave out! Someone called her cute! The audacity!

[Switch]

Looking pretty hooked there! Smooth work and symmetry. Looks good.

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Nubiananan responds:

Thank you very much!