Nice retake on the NG preloader, it looks futuristic, as does the rest of the interface. The cutscenes work well, easy to click past, and the speech moves at a good pace, just the right pace to read. Graphics are smooth and anime-ish, which is a bit of a twist to the regular Mario world. The plot builds up well as well, seems like a series worth following. Love the transition from the regular SMW to an underground an d a transformation to a completely different heroine. Nintendo, you watching this? :P
One thing that would improve this a lot is adding voices. Some good voice actors would make it ten times as good as it already is. Keep it going!
-cd-