If I didn't read the description I wouldn't really have followed the trail of 'thought', but apart from the somewhat fuzzy plot progression it was beautifully animated. Seems not entirely finished, with some sketches and line-work shining through, but still incredibly smooth and expressive. Has an almost Disney-like style to it. Love the fluidity, and the show of emotion, even if you need those written hints to fully get it. Shows great potential!
-cd-