A pretty macabre dream too! And sad. You convey that pretty well, if it was... would've been nice with a happier ending, or at least some kind of meaning, some conclusion, something that goes somewhere where you might be satisfied with how it goes... but I guess it's a dream after all.
Not bad. A little vocal practice and it'd be pretty masterful. ;) The mood comes across either way. Soft and melancholy.
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