An almost dystopian cityscape shining through that almost smog-like haze... is it really all dust? No smog? The search light-like sun ray caught on a window a really nice touch, and the flock of birds making their way through the misty milieu. Mountains in the background do look more like mountains here too! One thing I feel I'm missing a bit are more buildings. Maybe smaller peaks just barely rising/visible through the blanket of gray. It'd make it look more like a whole city I think, and less like a fort. An isolated monument in the dust. Anyway this was pretty cool. Mysterious tone to it too.
-cd-