Cyberdevil's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ball Bounce Pratice]

Well it's a pretty smooth bounce, but not much else! The smoke puffs look a bit odd, in how short-lived and aligned they are, just the one on each side. Shadow seems to fall behind the ball too, and not disappear even when it rises pretty high.

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[Always a Good Business Deal Cover]

Whatever this is about it does look like a pretty good deal! XD Interesting typography too, with the transparent effect and all... looks like something that could be in a visual novel. Good stuff.

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[Charlie Kelly]

That is one smoking cup of... whatever is in that cup! If it's meant to look like steam I'm thinking a transparent layer might have a better effect. Otherwise nice drawing.

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[Hitomi]

That one eye!! I wasn't expecting that one eye. Great portrait overall but that caught me off guard a bit. Those background eyes too. XD Seems she's got an audience...

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gatekid3 responds:

I highly recommend the comic.

[Amelia Clovis; The silent killer]

She wields great natural weapons of distraction... though I did force myself to look at her face too! XD Looks good. Nice falling curls with the hair too,and I like the overall symmetry of the character. That gaze does look pretty cunning... nice work.

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[The Mafia]

Pretty shady looking character! Smooth work. The black and white style contrasts nicely with the red,too. Nice work with the glow and grin in particular. The overlapping marker fill shows a bit much for the lighter part of the hat, but otherwise all good!

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TheStrawberryBazooka responds:

Thank you!
I agree that the strokes are a bit scruffy, that will be digitally cleaned up in post-production before the cards are actually made to sell. It was my first time doing a heavily Inked drawing with a not-so-great brush pen I had, I have since then Fallen in love with the technique and I purchased a wonderful brush pen.

[Somewhere Other Chapter 21-15]

Seems they may not be that far away after all. :) Aaand all caught up. Feels like the pace does move a bit slowly, page by page, like it's one main move/discovery/action with each, but definitely fun to read.

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cecameron responds:

Thank you! And thank you for all of the nice comments.

[Somewhere Other Chapter 21-14]

Not the most inviting way hmm... smooth scenario switch.

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[Somewhere Other Chapter 21-13]

Hardheaded too. XD Considering how easy she was abducted it seems strange she'd escape so easily, too, but maybe being in a life-threatening situation can have that effect... getting exciting, anyhow!

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[Somewhere Other, Chapter 21-12]

She sure doesn't fear death! :D Or whatever creature this may be... lethal kick(s).

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