Cyberdevil's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[the end]

Hmm, well, with this one... it's hard to find any redeeming points really. The shapes are all shapes rather than drawn, the lines thin, the background blank, the text blotchy and the blood fake-looking... I'm getting curious about what series of books this might've been though. Assume this was made with Paint too? Humble beginnings!

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[me]

The way you're squinting with one eye here... you seem like a pretty tough guy! Also a much more developed and muscular right arm than the other one! Carrying grocery bags on one side might help even things out there. Anyway good stuff. Cool haircut too.

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[Pixel Art!]

Really not bad for a first attempt! :) Seems you caught the cursor in the image, but apart from that it looks pretty much pixel perfect. Some more shading on the ground/plants, to match the level of the character, would be nice, but form's all good.

I assume she's holding her arms behind her back too btw? It's not obvious with how the shading's still more on one side, and you don't really see them going behind her back - just getting cut off - but that wasn't anything I noticed right away right. Maybe a way of saving in on work; making things simpler? ;) Good stuff though.

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[B-SuperSpellHeroes - Thoben]

After the WIP this is definitely a big step up! Smooth contours, color and all. I like the untraditional (these days) crisp edge too. Gives it an aspect of pixel art too, and if the motive would've been different the style really reminds me of Clip Art too, also in the flat/plain surface textures. I think transparent glasses, fire without edges, and such things would break that style a bit, but this works too. Bout of nostalgia there. :D Again I think centering the character would give a better impression, but otherwise looking good!

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[B-SuperSpellHeroes - Thoben Sketch]

Not a bad sketch! Simple but functional line work, bit sketchy and incomplete but: as a sketch I'd expect no less! Does bug me a little that the character's not all centered on the canvas though.

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[Bowsette]

Bowsette looking good! Smooth color, background and all.

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[Monstria]

He/she (?) does look like a monster, but though impression comes across the rest seems pretty sketchy! Green tail but white character? Gives the impression the coloring's not complete. The sketchy line work and signature, and blotchy background, all makes it seem it's a bit rushed too. Maybe the style and form's not bad, but as large as it is it looks a bit basic. Good start, but you can do more refined I think. ;) Keep it going!

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Kawiieye responds:

I was made this just because I doodle her from time to time ,the reason why it,s so large and my signature in the way is because I first made the image to large for newgrounds and photoshop so I had to crop beyond belief I also had to add my signature back to so when I was making it wasn't rushed I forgot erase the sketch layer so, but the editing rushed, but thank you for the constructive criticism :)

[Marridelle]

Looking Foxy! :) If it wasn't for the name I'd think it was a spin-off on the Red Riding Hood saga, almost like the story all shrunk together and turned into this one... nice close-up.

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[Blarggette]

Definitely made as scary as possible here. :) Good pose, good lighting; a fiery surrounding too. Also: you can do styles other than pixel too! :D Not bad.

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ScepterDPinoy responds:

I do think making sprites is easier and quicker than making hi res digital art as far as I know.