Cyberdevil's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Jake, Alexa, and the Jelly Monster Episode 1.]

So far so good! :D Simple graphics, but the story's followable! Just not really sure what's happening in the last frame... high five moment? Flying into the sky...?

Regarding speech bubbles: it's good practice to have them in the order you read, so you don't need numbers to tell the reader which to read first. If you lead a speech bubble from one character you can place it on the opposite side of the screen to if they're in the wrong order by default, so the flow of dialog is as smooth as possible.

Story-wise it's not bad! Looking forward to part 2.

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TheFutursticPro responds:

Oh, uh, at the last frame, its probably a high five. :P
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[Jake, Alexa, and the Jelly Monster.]

Despite the somewhat simplistic stick figure graphics this does look interesting. :) Almost like a rainbow with those two (I assume) main characters closing in there... nice focus.

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[Miles Morales]

Looking pretty spooky here! Still gotta see that movie too... smooth work.

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[Akumi Character Sheet 2019]

Looking pretty slender! Smooth work, though without those extra boots those legs really do look loooong. Understand why she wields those now!

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MiltoniusArts responds:

Thank you! Yeah I'm liking both looks so she'll switch between tech boots and tech sneakers. :)

[Christmas Presents]

Can't not appreciate the style here! Such a mesh of texture, light and color. Looks nice.

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silenceartwork responds:

thank you! Im still struggling to find a good set up for my non-paintings

[Elgara Lavellan : To redeem him...]

A pretty beautiful piece! Bright, lightly framed and color... looks good.

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[Bowsette]

Bowsette looking great! Smooth work.

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Appelknekten responds:

Thank ya~!

[Princesses Christmas]

A very merry trio! :) The dress textures seems somewhat simple and not all cloth-like, but I do like the design otherwise! Smooth work. Happy Holidays!

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DidiEsmeralda responds:

Thank you Cyberdevil, I'm glad you like it

[Not a duck]

Ariel looking good! Definitely not like a duck. XD Smooth work. Style's pretty much just like the original too, only thing I imagine would really add to this are some scales on her fin.

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[19th Birthday]

So that's what you do on your 19th huh. XD Looks so out of character here but: Happy Birthday! Ain't life like that the whole stretch, though? You never grow up completely!

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