Cyberdevil's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Playful Atropos Pinup]

Atropos looking good! Really smooth work here.

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[I know this looks racist....]

This is one weird way to show watermelon appreciation... but I do like it. XD Gritty style and strong color... almost a hypnotizing tone to that watermelon slice too. Looks nice.

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Spicy-cheetos responds:

Yes it’s a weird way to show appreciation.What makes this even more hilarious is that I didn’t even think about the race when I drew it until someone I knew pointed it out. I drew it because I personally love watermelon and didn’t think of the negative connotations of it within the black community.I was like “oh god....” when that person pointed that out😆

They told me to change the race of my character because of the issue, but I think it would of been even more racist to change the race of my character due to an old stereotype from ages ago. Let the boy have his watermelon. When I told the individual that I wasn’t going to white wash him they advised not to post this piece online. As you can see I did it anyway 😆

[Kagero Fanart]

Kagero looking good! Smooth work and a strong background too. Wondering if the legs wouldn't look better were they not cut off at the bottom, but overall: great stuff.

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[that treacherous ice cream]

Not sure what role the ice cream plays in all of this, but I like it! XD Warm and steamy scene, with a hazy beach in the background... sunshine sizzling away as if on a summer day. It looks inviting!

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0chidori0 responds:

ajajaja xD well, the rol of the icecream is the make alei (The dragon) Jealous, because azure (the mermaid) pay more atention to the ice cream ant let his boy friend a little alonexD...and it´s not the first time xD

Thanks! glad you liket nvn! that the idea,To create a summer tempting climate <3, though they are not the dates indicated to post a drawing like this xD

pd: sorry for my very bad english ><u

[Giant Burg]

Such a well-done hybrid! :D You can really both taste the flavor and feel like you're one of those there to partake in such festivities... I think the somewhat fuzzy photography quality works well for the merge. Nice.

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[Krystal Kicks It]

Apart from the blue hair she's really reminding me of Air Master here. :) Same form and all, and a blazing light in the background to reflect the power of that kick... looks good!

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Newtypemo responds:

Glad you think so. The aesthetic works.

[My lioness Ketzuri~]

Ketzuri looking good! Really smooth work. Also really reminds me of Sarabi, but I guess similarities come with the breed too... smooth work.

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[HOLD IT!]

A strange creature looking lonely? Interesting details with the teeth there. Smooth forms and colors overall, and a nice contrast with the background. Definitely an intriguing character!

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[Jake, Alexa, and the Jelly Monster Episode 1.]

So far so good! :D Simple graphics, but the story's followable! Just not really sure what's happening in the last frame... high five moment? Flying into the sky...?

Regarding speech bubbles: it's good practice to have them in the order you read, so you don't need numbers to tell the reader which to read first. If you lead a speech bubble from one character you can place it on the opposite side of the screen to if they're in the wrong order by default, so the flow of dialog is as smooth as possible.

Story-wise it's not bad! Looking forward to part 2.

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TheFutursticPro responds:

Oh, uh, at the last frame, its probably a high five. :P
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[Jake, Alexa, and the Jelly Monster.]

Despite the somewhat simplistic stick figure graphics this does look interesting. :) Almost like a rainbow with those two (I assume) main characters closing in there... nice focus.

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