Cyberdevil's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Newspaper]

Plot twist: could the causative of said rampage be the man sitting on the bench, seemingly angered by the rampage? :P Probably not, but the 'still at large' bit seems to imply that might be relevant to the story itself... which I guess it isn't. Overall it's a fun script, a little simple, but good introduction to the characters, and Cody's interest for comedy explains the final frame. The other man's anger though... seems a bit unjustified. He seems angry rather than distressed by the news, too. Guess that's explained by his bio too, but still, he seems to react a bit too much in almost every frame. I'm wondering if the second row really needs to be there too, as it doesn't really contribute anything, just lengthen the comic. He could've handed over the paper right away.

Feels like the pacing and expression can be improved, and as CD mentioned also the white dots, and a consistent angle on pavement/street. Also maybe more consistent spacing between frames, and more defined arrows between them. But overall I'm pretty impressed by the detail level, and it did make me smile a bit. Big fan of the D&C world too, so all cameos and subtle references appreciated there. :P Looking forward to seeing how this evolves! Good start.

-cd-

[Sunset Shimmer |MLP EG| PBS Swimsuit Fanart]

Colorful and smooth! Feels like a pretty original style too. Not bad.

-cd-

[Tifa Lockhart]

One of my favorite characters riding the waves here! Appreciate the creative style of water too, looks both tribal and realistic, both fresh and artistic, strange but good. Smooth work, and the face/hair: just perfect. Great detail.

-cd-

DidiEsmeralda responds:

Thank you,Cyberdevil I'm glad you like it

[Rogue Savage Land]

Looking wild! Smooth and exotic, though the clean style seems a bit conflicting with the occasional blotch of dirt... at a closer glance it seems like just the one smudge too. Looking good though.

-cd-

[Thank you, I'm glad you like it.]

So smooth and beautiful! Fantastic work.

-cd-

DidiEsmeralda responds:

Thanks Cybedevil for your comment

[CUte Pauline (Alt Hair)]

Definitely a new kind of style! I like the grungy background, angle and all. Could be a poster.

-cd-

[Toulouse]

Cuteness with unexpected realism to it! Not bad.

-cd-

[sanic]

The movie's going to be something else... I hope. XD Morbid.

-cd-

[Raffle Winner: Ottera]

Looking pretty mischievous here! Smooth work.

-cd-

[Blonde Marvel Takes Flight]

Really digging the backdrop with this one! Bright and fiery. She comes across as almost angelic, and great detail on the hand, though the rest: somewhat simple. Nice work.

-cd-