Cyberdevil's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Day 2- Inside of the mind]

OK now this one's one without any potential wonkiness to break the mood... all elements enforce the mood. Text helps add to it all too. The mind an open door to a potential cure, yet with what seems like an uncertain other side, the fear to confront your fears for real... imagery feels a bit simple but the scene really speaks so much...

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[Day 1- Perish]

Seems like this one too should evoke a darker feeling than it does with me, but the arm just pointing straight out of the door like that...

Sad expression/title conflicts a bit with the entertaining first impression of arm/door, but not bad...

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[Sword hold]

Like a modern day Jeanne d'arc! Nice.

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[Day 9- Refletion]

Ooh, definitely the most professional one yet! The raster wall texture. The somewhat slanted angles on the mirror. The expression. Bi unnecessary lines or wonky artifacts (small bit on the one edge of the hairdo though, top left). The way the hair/dress waves. Placement too. Really solid.

Also curious what stuff it reminds you of!

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[Day 10- The Incident]

lmao! XD Though it sounds like this is supposed to be dark... I can't help laugh at it a bit. Just something about 'The Incident', coupled with the very sprawled out pose, with the very obvious dagger in back. It's so obvious it somehow becomes entertaining... sorry if I'm really not meant to be getting this impression.

Maybe the light also brightens the mood a little? Could see some symbolism in it too, a tunnel of light, the afterlife... though it's a dark scene it somehow doesn't feel so dark either.

I like this one. Even if this wasn't what you were going for, it's just so spot on...

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[Day 8- Void]

Sometimes less is more but... wonder about the ground and dark gradients in the corners. Takes away a bit from the main focus here. Also hmm, always picture the void more like absolute darkness... interesting.

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[Day 12- Clowns]

You're doing these too huh. :) Not bad! Only thing that bugs me a bit here are the inconsistent window bars. And maybe the leftover line work. And that black part of the wall that you're not really sure what it is... character bit though, which I should probably be focusing on: looking good.

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[GIFT: Briar]

So flowery and benevolent. :) What a wonderful gift.

Traditional; not all too bright coloring too. Feels homely somehow...

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[Housekeeper.]

Spunky! :D The way her hair floats out; her entire body seems to pique up, as if gravity doesn't apply to her... almost like she's not really from this world at all. Or just a dancer by nature. Bewitching; beautiful. Smoothly drawn too! Love the style.

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tomwlod responds:

Thank you for your words

[Retrained]

Love that you're standing up to the government with this type of stuff. Individuality all gone, damn, digital jobs might be in demand right now but power to the people who can stay out in the real world; express themselves artistically however it's still possible too...

You ever thought of trying to get some of your satire into some magazine/paper? Maybe some local one would be interested? Seems you have an interest for this sort of stuff too.

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ChazDude responds:

Not sure if newspapers would want my cartoony, bipedal humanoids, but who knows, I could be wrong!