I could see this one getting sold as merch! :D Love it, though the slanted text hmmm! Reminds me of the other one where the text was angled the same way - maybe the style's in reference to the movie/game in particular? If not I feel it'd probably look better if it grew more so than slanted. A more perspective-based shift, small at the start/bigger to the right/along with the characters? With the lines growing it feels like that'd be a natural progression too. Text does grow a little but doesn't seem to really pop out at you yet IMO. Wonder if the slant maybe reduces that impression too. Good stuff though.
-cd-