Nice. the darkness really doesn't look that dark, plus it looks like she's out in the open so you don't really get any feeling of her being lost, and that expression feels a bit misaplced in the otherwise regular scenery. On the other hand, it's nicely drawn! The sky is especially detailed. Some shading on the character would make her seem more realistic, it's like ehs's standing in a spotlight, barely any shadow at all! Keep it up!
-cd-