Looking good! The drawing style makes me think of xXxHolic. It's a clash of color and cloth. Interesting robe with fiery texture, swirls of ribbon and a more formal coat in the background. The motives in the background look almost like photos. Are they? Or are they other art? Maybe they were made specifically for this drawing? I'm also wondering who the two character represent. Am guessing you and your cousin? Looks good, keep it going!
-cd-