It sails like an eagle, without freedomly limit
Onto the graves in oceans, atop fairly ravished pits
Without rails to lead it, without roads to trail
The warship, the Gods, set sail
Poetry by Me
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Posted by Cyberdevil - October 15th, 2009
It sails like an eagle, without freedomly limit
Onto the graves in oceans, atop fairly ravished pits
Without rails to lead it, without roads to trail
The warship, the Gods, set sail
Poetry by Me
S3C
i like this one, your 3-4 liner writings appeal more to me- not to say that you're longer poems are bad, but I guess the shorter ones leave more room for interpretation...or something
do you right a poem a day?
Cyberdevil
Thanks, I like writing fourliners too, it doesn't take as much time, hehe.
Most days I write at least one, yes, all of these poems are older poems though.