Bamboo Shoots!
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Bamboo Shoots!
Age 35, Male
Poet/Designer/Etc
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Sweden
Joined on 1/17/04
CloudEater
Nice poem, but I don't like the use of the same words that many times.
The last verse is really good.
Also you don't have to make the word at the end of every line rhyme and it is often better to spread the rhyming out more.
Cyberdevil
Thanks, yeah, this one is a bit repetetive.