So the ring can be used for good after all! :D What an adventure that turned out to be. Feels like there's some element missing in this, maybe... sound effects? Background music? The script's good but the story doesn't flow as well as it could. Maybe more emphasis with the voices too? Keep at it!
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lmao, crazy vegetation... with a message? It's symbolic of the neighbors themselves I suppose, of the varied views that clash and create fantastic feuds for all those dudes who live too huge. I like the fuzzy somewhat handdrawn style of drawing, gives everything a unique kind of atmosphere. Voice acting and idea are both great. Nice work!
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Haha, I really wasn't expecting that ending! Awesome job at making the foes seem as sinister as possible, the eyes shifting shape and color, the magical swirls and subtle sounds and then... I thought he was a bit more attached to that sceptre! :O Or whatever it's called. Felt like you were getting back on track with this after the last surprisingly short animation, but alas it is the grand finale! The end! Within an unforseable future! It's sad news but best of luck out there in the real world; hope to see more projects of yours when time allows it.
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Thanks Cd, always loved your constructive criticism, even when I didn't do my best. I hope one day, hopefully some time soon, I'll be getting more feedback from you once again. You're a great piece to the community of NG :)
Hah, well that's what happens when you try using a wooden sword on a vicious foe! Nice work. Also awesome gif. Awesome everything. Keep it going!
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Woo, that was... incredibly cute and surprisingly creepy... but still way more cute than creepy. Soft music, cheerful voice acting and a simple plot somewhat intensified by arrays of spiderlegs and what I first assumed to be a group of monsters staring out from behind that helping sister. It's a subtly surprising short!
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Yeah i wish i could do more for the spider bodies with which the sisters posess (If you know the Dark Souls story) and give them more screen time but i just didn't have any ideas for them. If this short does well i will try making something for them next time. Thank you for your comment. ^^
lol,any plans on turning this into... a soap opera. :P Nice contrast between the bright and hopeful soap and the dark and despairing. Keep it going!
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This was some pretty spectacular voice acting! With real emphasis and cartoonish accentuation and yowzaing! Animation's not bad either, and the idea's a nice slice of universal entertainment. A glimpse into a sealed off secret, or a distant future, or whatever spectre of dimensia it takes place in. Nice work!
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So, it's based on a game! The idea would've been even more awesome if it was as creatively unique as it seems to be, but either way the lack of education and the apparent violence of the paradoxially non-gravitational area was just great. Really smooth; entertaining animation... and that end. XD Nice work!
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Yep, I have an idea for an original series but I want to get better at writing and storytelling first. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
lmao, the best for last. Twas both a bit silly and hilarious at the same time, great narration and variation. Nice work!
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What an awesome first episode! And... it's not even the first episode yet! The annotations were a pretty interesting feature, leading to all types of secret links and easter-egg type content, makes for more replayability than the regular video... though it'd be cool if you could watch with or without as they do get in the way of the viewing experience a bit... if you have, say, already clicked all of them. Also pretty neat including a choice at the end; leaving the future of the series up to the users!
Animation, art, script, voice acting and everything is just awesome. As for the LQ, maybe a message to the staff might open up for a greater upload size permit? I remember in the old days they used to say people could send them a message if the filesize wasn't enough to have account limits lifted for specific content forms. Who knows, maybe that still applies. Looking forward to the next episode of this. Keep it going!
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Thank you for the kind words! Stuff like this actually keeps us going and inspired. I'm actually working on a way to auto-pause the video when an annotation is clicked, and resume it when you click the screen.
Did you sign up for the choices in the end? ;)
Bamboo Shoots!
Age 34, Male
Poet/Designer/Etc
ACCOMPLISHED
Sweden
Joined on 1/17/04
Small and Tall: Ring 
Neighborhood Argument 
Wizard vs Werewolf 
The Legend of Old Man 
Dark Souls: Dear Sister 
Soapy the Soap 
Mister Crystal 
Munar 1 
Spiderman VS Spiderman 
Best Quest - Episode 0 
