Hah, awesome. The gritty style wouldn't be half as great without the completely random lyrics. The tagline is great, but most of the song isn't very easy to hear. Maybe too low volume, too high reverb? Not sure, but it would be good with some more clarity. The beat also seems to trip over the rythem sometimes, but I like the style. Keep it going!
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Thank you
Haha, what a clash of poetry and attitude. I'm wondering if the laughter midway is an intentional part of the voice acting? You'd think laughing by script is pretty difficult. Nice work on this!
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Hah! Actually, that wasn't part of the script. I was just laughing because I found my own reading hilarious. :3
The mic name doesn't say much to me, but it must be decent because the sound quality is clear as air. Maybe not as ample as it could be, but definitely good. Have you tried improving the quality via Audacity or is this all RAW? The piano play itself is beautiful, and from a series I've watched too. Nice work!
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Casio WK-200 is my keyboard. Um, I'm not really sure how I can improve the quality in Audactiy. Maybe I should look up some tutorials...?
Thank you for the review!
It sounds good, but not really anything I could chill too. The other one of your two newest tracks felt much more chill than this one, this feels more like a train ride or falling down a slope. Nice music though, smooth and atmospheric. Keep it going!
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Hey! Thank you for listening and leaving honest feedback :D
I had no idea what to call this song haha! Maybe it is because it sounded like chill music to my ears, since I could relax while listening to this song. Either way, I'll keep this in mind in the future. Thank you again! I will work harder!
The voices that kicked in around 2 minutes were a bit unexpected, and though not very notible they somehow clash with the otherwise ambient feel of the track. I appreciate the variation but how aboaut an additional layer of instrumentality instead, maybe strings? Sounds good overall, nice and smooth!
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Thank you for listening and commenting! I'm glad you find the track good overall.
That's interesting what you said about the voices around the 2 minute mark. Those additional voices are actually synth strings. So you think I should go with a more realistic string sound? If you like, you can PM me and tell me what you think.
Either way, thank you so much! I will work harder!
Hmm, I was going to pop up the old version and compare them, but it's gone! :O This sounds good though, much more complete than the previous one at the end, even though it doesn't seem longer? The phasing out works well, and I like the dreamy intersection as it closes in on a minute. The sound is still a bit sharp at the start, but it sounds good, overall fuller than it did before. Keep it going!
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Oh sorry I pulled the other one. Dx
It's only a small bit longer than the wip. I decided to keep it fairly short.
Thanks for the review again cyber!
This sounds almost like dubstep at times. Plenty of variation, plenty of intensity, plenty of industrialism and a steady beat in the background that somehow makes me think of Daft Punk. Wonder where the similarity lies though. I like the build-up towards the end especially. It sounds good!
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Thanks a lot man! Daft Punk is (of course) one of my favorites so there's no stopping them from creeping in on the finer ends of production time. Good call!
I like the melody, and the oldskool VG style this has to it, but it feels the sounds are a bit sharp overall, especially at the start when there aren't any other layers backing them up. The melodic twist is nice though, and the background beat, and the peaks around :40. Towards the end, the sound kind of evolves from sharp to fuller, a nice strengthening transition even though I wish the beginning wasn't so cutting. It ends a bit abruptly, but I guess that's why it's WIP. Looking forward to the finished version!
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Thank you for the review! ^^
I really like the beat in this, once it kicks in. The shakers get a bit monotone but everything else has a nice dark fluency to it. I can't really find the link between this and dentists, which I have a particular phobia for, it's actually a nice and ambient track. Simple melody, smooth sound. Great listening!
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Thanks man, glad you enjoyed it. Yeah, the title is a weird one. Basically i had in mind aliens landing andd invading earth armed with dental drills. Which i too have a massive phobia of the dentist office.
Sounds like that device didn't manage to capture this as well as the other recording. Still good guitar play, though!
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Again, thank you! yea, one was with some serious distortion and the other was pretty much clean. If i can get myself some good recording stuff i will see about other players and some good recording. I am just a hobby player. =)
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