Haha, not bad at all! The accent doesn't bother, apart from maybe that last voice that sounded more American or Italian. Sound quality is good though, and this was an entertaining listen too. Wonder if the length is intentionally the same as a song or if that's just how it turned out? Good luck with your voice acting career!
The length actually did partially a role. Nobody likes to listen someone talking for very long, so I tried to keep it simple.
Thanks for the feedback.
Beautiful voice, sharp and clear recording quality, pretty lovely lyrics too! I was a bit bugged by how the musical rhythm doesn't really seem to be the best fit for the lyrical melody though, it feels like the beat is either too fast, or there aren't enough instruments moving at a slower pace. Some guitar would definitely be a nice addition, or any other strings that don't 'skip' as the music does. Keep it going!
Methinks the World has not heard the last of Something Lovely ;)
This was beautiful, an ambient melody to back up a powerful vocal venture, the different vocal layers work well at giving it some kind of otherworldly touch, style reminds me a bit of Hania. Btw, who wrote the lyrics, is that LadyArsenic as well? It's nice, poetically atmospheric. Feels like you could've used that musical solo space for something more pompous, but it's great as it is too, subtle and consistent. Nice work!
I composed everything (including the lyrics). LadyArsenic added her flare to my original vocal melody and really took the song to another level.
Glad you liked it. Thanks for the review!
better than I'd expected, you really do have a repertoire of voices and personalities available, and it doesn't seem like it's too difficult to switch between them either. The only thing you really need to invest in is a better microphone, when the voice goes loud this clips too much. Good luck on yer future career voicing!
Definitely. Right now I'm making due with a cheap-o $15 P.O.S, and after a bit of refining through Audacity it's (moderately) presentable. I'll most certainly invest in a more substantial microphone when people start needing work from me.
The first two lines didn't really sync, but after that everything flows perfectly, and the seven eight nines are a fun finale. I'm thinking maybe you could breath in more and add some volume to your voice though? Either way this is great, good beat, no filler lyrics, great track! And yeah the musical industry is hard to get into, it's the dream life with demand for only a selected few so of course there's tons of competition. Keep it going though!
Thanks for the review man, I appreciate the advice!
As a matter of fact, I'm presently in the process of rewriting and re-recording this track, and improving a lot of things.
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CHANGES TO BE MADE:
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A rewrite and re-recording of verse one (More Energy, More Clarity, Less Braggadocio), complete with some sweet-ass rhyme revisions!
A second verse will be added!
The hook will be re-recorded!
The instrumental will be tweaked to sound better!
MAY speed the beat up a little
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tl;dr: REMAKE DROPPIN' SOON SOON!
I like how this builds up. Starts off simple, but about a minute in it's reaching orchestral proportions. Mighty and inspiring! I think 1:30 would've been a good place to let it end though, build it up to a pinnacle of power and pompousness and then let it echo away. Would've been cool... great track though!
Thanks for the information :)
Sounds like it's pretty easy for you to delve into new accents and personas, great acting! And en entertaining reel for it. Keep it going!
Thanks very much! :D
This sounds good, smooth and atmospheric, a bit tense until the melody shifts around the minute. It turns into a happier melody than I'd expected, kinda wonder how it would've turned out if you kept the tension, but it sounds good. The drums are a trippy but nicely synced addition. Keep it going!
thanks dude, it took a while with the drums and i guess that later i can try to keep the tension, i have some ideas to work with
This is a nice tune, smooth and ambient yet full of energy. Would be perfect for a fast-paced platformer... maybe even a racing game. It's easy listening to over and over, nice work!
Thanks, I'm glad you like it!
The first 2-5 seconds were great, hope you don't get rid of them even if they weren't intentional. It's a nice intro, and after that it really picks up. I like the melody, but it feels like there's something missing. Might be a beat, or some form of bass/wave. Not sure, but keep it going!
Thanks for the feedback
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